Well, I'm a day late! Thank goodness for Fundy Blue or I would have never realized I missed it! Thanks for visiting my blog!
Progress is slow, but going. I received my first beta reader feedback a few weeks ago, and it kind of blew me away. It was overwhelmingly positive, which I wasn't expecting. There was a lot of good advice from both readers, one a SciFi fan, the other not. But it's so hard to quiet the little critic in the mind. What if they were just being nice since they're paid betas? What if they don't really know what they are talking about? What if this is a random match and everyone else hates it?
Seriously? What is with that voice?
Don't worry, I don't let that get me down, but it does slow me down a little. I see this as a good thing though. It makes me look deeper and think carefully.
Some of the advice revolved around exploring relationships the main characters have with their own family/culture. That would be a good way to increase the Worldbuilding and help the reader better understand the complex mythology.
Since the feedback related to pacing or sequence was good, there are no major revisions. But I'm still taking my time to ensure I carefully work in any new scenes. Part of me wants to get more feedback before making changes, but I'm not sure. Maybe make a few small changes first?
I also have plotted and begun drafting another novel. This one is more fantasy, and a lot of fun to write. It's Asian-inspired since I've always admired the artwork and mythology of that part of our world. (And because I watch a little too much K-Drama. I may or may not be completely obsessed with Alchemy of Souls...) I'll post more about that work later.
For now, here is the question of the month:
June 5 question - In this constantly evolving industry, what kind of offering/service do you think the IWSG should consider offering to members?
Yes, a list of services provided by IWSG members would be useful. I also suggested it in my post.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad your beta reader's comments were so helpful and positive. Great idea to have a list of resources.
ReplyDeleteOthers have suggested that and we will look into it.
ReplyDeleteIf the comments were mostly positive, make those changes first before going for more beta readers. Trust yourself!
Congratulations on getting back your first beta comments! That's such a huge step in a novel and I'm glad you found them to be overwhelmingly positive. There's so much fear about getting feedback, it's nice when it's not so bad. but you're right about that pesky little voice. Sounds like you're doing a great job!
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